Eminem - Recovery (cnc appreciated)

OK, so the lighting in this one is way off.. i was messing around with c4d's and paid too much attention to them, instead of the pic itself.. i think im gonna move the text closer to the render too, because the more i look at it, the more it seems like i almost created a second focal by putting the text so far away from him..

im starting to try and figure out how to blend the render into the background too, because i definately need to work on that. but other than that, it definately fit the bill as far as what i was trying to do, CnC please.

Personaly i think this is your best on yet. BUt some suggestions are to blur the render more and the ighting is off and teh text doestn fit were it it is. But non the less it ooks alright you are progressing and its good

yea i messed with the text for a while, and couldnt get it right, but i have since fixed it.. i dont want to blur the render and F it all up, im lookin at some blending tut's now, and i think i actualy got it lookin a little better.. ill repost it later when im finished

i think u should blur the render and change the text , make it blend cuz the way it is now ur eyes move back and forth between backround and render . im not GFX person but i just thought i would add that in.

On another note:

Glad to see ur gettin better