[GFx] Army of Two (CnC?)

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Cnc please

Try a new style, I'm not a fan of this.

To much blank space, the effects coming off of him is kinda random, no depth, or flow, and text is bad.

Pick a new tutorial, cause this one is just notttt working man.

KIU

EverEffects wrote:

Try a new style, I'm not a fan of this.

To much blank space, the effects coming off of him is kinda random, no depth, or flow, and text is bad.

Pick a new tutorial, cause this one is just notttt working man.

KIU

Didnt use a tutorial, just used the same brush to smudge the background render. its an X brush that i made that makes the edges of the back render look kinda like flames, and i was just messing around with it.

thanks for the cnc though

Yea I dunno about the text but other than that i think it looks dope! I think a tag needs to have like a render just coming out of a fog all the time. I think this is good

P.s this is Zz.TR4FF1C.zZ i didnt realize my brothers account was logged in

Increase your render size to feature more of a focal.
The effects are cool.
I would suggest working on your depth.
Your flow is decent.
Your lighting and overall atmosphere seems to be working ok for this tag.
Your ideas for text are ok, but....
I would drop that horizontal line thingy down and bring your text together.
Text work is best placed near or close to the main focal area.
Also, consider dropping the stroke size on your border to about 1px.
Although this tag is somewhat plain, it is very nice to look at.
You are developing nicely. Just now start getting more detailed behind your render.

Thank you SH4ND4I, i was kinda floored when Freddy douched all over this one, because i actually thought it was pretty good o.O

Thanks for the ideas, it seems like when i make a sig, i do well with the larger more important details, and suck when it comes to the small things.

(i think fred SH*T on me so bad, because i made a tag right before this one, that i used the same kinds of effects on, and the same brushes to smudge, and it was strikingly close in color, i thought the effects and brush would work better on a bigger render like this one)

who deleted my post?

I think your God of war tag was probably your best. This still.. I don't like it one bit. I read over Shandai's cnc, I still see no flow, and text isn't good in my opinion. As for the effects, maybe its just not my style.

I did not say the flow is great. I said the flow is decent.
Flow is direction of action that draws attention to the focal.
So, the issue is not exactly flow or no flow.
The issue is FOCAL.

If we MAKE A HABIT OF FEATURING OUR FOCAL the flow and depth and all the other elements that make for a good tag will come together.
It all starts with the FOCAL.